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, which this picture turns out, that has enough and
ridiculous grounds
to let us stay in front of the screen and trigger someone to
indulge into
phone.
上面这名同学为了给阅卷者留下印象，特地用了很多生僻单词和句式，但很多表达都用错了，结果适得其反。
实际上，如果我们用好小词，同样能打动阅卷者。我用一些常见的单词和句式对上面这段话进行了改写：
In the picture, a young girl is clearly
glued to
her mobile phone. At 8:45 pm, she
convinces herself that
it is still too early to
set
her phone
aside
and get some sleep. Before she knows it, three hours
slip by
.
Aware that
it is now late into the night, she
reassures
herself, “Well, there are still 15 minutes until midnight—I can keep scrolling just a little longer.” Like a mirror, this picture reveals how easily we
rationalize
our excessive phone use.
上面加粗的单词和句式难度都不高，不超过大学四级水平，但使用效果明显比用大词难词要好，而且这其中很多词的通用性也很强，可以用在各类写作当中。
像上面这类的单词和句式，我们语料库中一共
有300多个
。如果能够掌握好这些表达，那么你的语言应用水平会更上一层楼，写作也更加容易拿到高分。
为了让同学们更加系统地学习这些表达，我们推出了“
英语话题写作社群
”，社群将这300多个单词和句式融入到30篇作文中，在具体的写作练习中学习如何用好常见词。
在社群里面，我将会带领各位同学
动手写完30篇作文
。这些作文不仅包含了常见词练习，也包含了具体的思路和素材讲解（讲解形式为视频课）。这30篇作文一共包含了以下话题：
